FALL poem:)

since its almost fall :) my favorite time of year i have a poem that is what i like most about the season!!

Fall

The leaves changing,
makes your heart smile
makes your feelings run wild
and makes you remember the past
The weather growing colder,
brings out the sweaters and jeans.
how the breeze feels perfect,
when it blows your hair from your face.
the pumkins coming out,
for the special holiday.
this changing of seasons
bings a smile to your face.
when you think about the joyful times it brings
All you think about is good.
The season of Fall begins

Another poem :)

That Place (not sure about the name)

Here i am lost in my thoughts.
Where should i turn,
my head spinning, i can't see.
the wind blowing outside,
distracts from the mind inside.
i sit here and watch the world moving forward,
as i just stay where i am safe from harm.
But am i really safe?
Just what people say could hurt a human being.
Their words could break something inside you,
that you didn't know could break.
Is there somthing i could do to help?
probably not, nothing i could do could prevent
this from happening, what you feel...
is what you feel.
As my mind spins and my thoughts
run wild, i stay sitting staring into space.
Its like a fantasy that comes to life,
but then you realize how horrid the fantasy is,
and you fall down.
no one there to catch you.
no one there to hold you when you cry.
only your friends could comfort you.
i am in that place.
the spot where you wish you,
could take back what you did.
finish putting the pieces back together.
and just live freely.

Sorry i was gone for so long :)

I am back with so much more!! my poems hopefully are a hit! but clearly not many people view my blog other then close friends. i have just gotten myself a new fancy labtop so i will be posting a lot more in the near future :)

One of my poems!

Disappointment

Everything coming out,
The world is closing in.
She looks at me in disappointment.
But what could I have done
Standing, thinking, breathing,
Closing my eyes to take it
All in at once.
She still looks at me in
Disappointment.
Like I could have done better.
But the question is...
What could I have done better?
What do I have to do to please her?
I receive no answer.
No response at all.
Not even the slightest noise was heard.
She still looks at me in disappointment.

Please give me your feedback!!! :) I would love to hear what you think. And there is more to come!

what is on my mind at the moment...

I am sitting at my computer thinking of what is on my mind. Okay ya i can't really believe i am doing this. It doesn't really make sense. I was thinking that i might put some of my poems up on here and see what people think. I mean if anyone actually sees my blog. Well if you do then i would love for you to comment and tell me what you think of my poems/ songs ( ya i have some songs too that i would love for you guys to give your input to) gracias!!! I will be on later :)