Disappointment
Everything coming out,
The world is closing in.
She looks at me in disappointment.
But what could I have done
Standing, thinking, breathing,
Closing my eyes to take it
All in at once.
She still looks at me in
Disappointment.
Like I could have done better.
But the question is...
What could I have done better?
What do I have to do to please her?
I receive no answer.
No response at all.
Not even the slightest noise was heard.
She still looks at me in disappointment.
Please give me your feedback!!! :) I would love to hear what you think. And there is more to come!
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